TITLE: IF YOU CAN’T MASTER ENGLISH, TRY GLOBISH
AUTHOR: MARY BLUME
This article was mainly about a new language which is called ‘Globish’ defined as a language which has achieved universal language statutes due to its striving for neutrality by means of using English words and phrases gererally understood throughout the English-speaking world. and it also gives the readers some ideas about how it helps people with communicating.
There are some points that prove that “globish” has many benefits over people. Firstly, ‘globish’ has such a structure that anyone who has a basic command of the language can use it. As the author said, ‘globish’ doesn’t include any localism so that we’re able to communicate over certain words. Secondly, words not stated in the list can be transformed into stated ones. For instance, the word ‘nephew’ can be said as “child of my brother/sister”, and it makes communicating easier. There is just one point that I do not agree with the author of the article. She mentioned only the advantages of this language. I think there is a drawback of it. Inasmuch as ‘globish’ is a simplified version of English, it may bother native English people because of the corruption of the language structure. All in all, ‘globish’ is very useful on these terms except for one drawback
Dear Esin,
YanıtlaSilYou have a nice style of writing, I really liked your writing. Also you have a nice subject to deal with. Your title is appropriate since it reflects the theme of your writing. You have stated the audience with the benefits of trying Globish and gave some majors. I particularly liked reading the first part. However, there are some points you need to pay attention. First of all, you should provide minors for each of your minors. By providing minors, you can make your reading ore detailed and attractive. Secondly, you should be careful with the punctuation and capital letters. For example, when you start a new sentence, you should use capital letters. Also you should put a full stop when you finish a sentence. Lastly, you should add some more information about your subject. You just wrote what Globish is and add if you agree or not by not giving minors for minors. As a consequence, your writing is a competent one in term of being detailed. I think if you work more on it, you can make it better.
Bests,
Emel
Thank you, Emel!
Sil